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Istillrememberthedaywhenwedecoratedthehouse.IwastenanditwastwoweeksbeforeChristmas.Iwaslookingforwardtomypresents.SinceImtheyoungestinthefamily,allofthefamilymemberswouldgivemeagiftonewayoranother.Sometimesitwasacookieorahugbutitwasalwaysthere.Iwastheonlycenterofattentionanditwasfeelinggood.AnunexpectedChristmasgift

MyunclesusuallywouldaskmewhatIwantedbeforeChristmasandthatyearIknewwhatIwanted.ItwasthespaceshipIsawintheads.Iwasdreamingofopeningabiggiftbox,anditwasthere.ButthatyearitcameinawaythatIwasntexpecting.

ItwastwoweeksbeforeChristmas.Justtwoweeks.Shecouldntwait.Mydearmothertoldmyfatherthatitwastime,andthenwewenttothehospital.Afteranhour,theytoldmethatIhadasisternow.ButIdidntwantasister.Iwantedaspaceship.Thenextfewdayswentsofast.Noonewascaringaboutme.EveryonewastalkingaboutherandIknewthatmylifeisnevergoingtobethesameeveragain.Iwasntreadytogrowup,tobeabigbrother.Butitjusthappenedinaninstant.

OnthedaybeforeChristmas,everyonewasinourhome,talkingonlyaboutmynewbornsister.Myfamilywasbecominghers.Evenmyunclesdidntaskmeanythingaboutthegift.ShestoleeverythingI’deverhad，mylifeandmypresents.Thinkingaboutthis，Icriedtosleep.Ihadanightmare（噩梦）andwokeupatthemiddleofthenight.Shadowswereallaroundme,andIwasdefenselessandsoweak.1ranintomyparents’bedroombutcouldntwakeupmypoorparentswhowerejusttoowornout.Iwasstandin