;读后续写题型即提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文
◆选材特点
(1)所需阅读的短文词数在350以内;
(2)多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主,故事情节有曲折、有起伏,但是,故事线索的逻辑性比较强。;
评分时,应从内容、语言(词汇、语法)和结构三个方面考虑
1.阅卷时主要考虑以下内容:
(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;
(2)内容的丰富性(细节描写:外貌、心理、语言、动作、表情、环境);
(3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;
(4)上下文的连贯性(注意与前文内容以及所给出句子的上下文连贯)。
2.注意:
(1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
(2)续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
3.评分时还应注意:
(1)词数少于120的,酌情扣分。
(2)书写较差以致影响交际的,酌情扣分(高考阅卷平均每篇作文10s)
;复习回顾:遇到一篇读后续写,我们需要读哪些要素呢?我们可以从哪些角度进行思考呢?;复习回顾:遇到一篇读后续写,我们需要读哪些要素呢?我们可以从哪些角度进行思考呢?;情景导入:观看视频,思考故事接下来会发生什么;情景导入:从人物和情节两个要素,归纳视频的写作要点;情景导入:观看原文的结尾,归纳视频的主旨(情感特质);Juliestoodinfrontofthemirror,herhandsshakingslightlyassheadjustedDavidstie.Thesuit,whichwastoobigforher,madeherlookabitcomical,butthedeterminedlookinhereyesbetrayedherresolve.Herphonebuzzed,andatextfromJennifer,Davidssecretary,litupthescreen:Everythingsset.
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