读后续写2024广东模考;Itwasafreezingwintermorning.Thesunwasonitsrisingjourneytowarmtheworld,andJosiewasonherwaytoschool.The10-year-oldgirlwaswalkingforwardfollowedbyherfather.Asusual,Josiewascuriousabouteverythingandobserving.Theofficeworkerswerehurryingtowork.Aguitarplayerwasplayingandsingingsurroundedbypassers-byandtourists.Agreyandblackbirdwashopping(双足齐跳)ontheground.Josieimitated(模仿)thelittlecreature,hoppingandlaughing.
;Whensheturnedaroundtoseeifherfatherwaswithinreach,shenoticedabeggarinragssittingonthestepsofabuildingwithahatbyhisfeet.Heheldupasignwithsomewordsonit.Withcuriosity,Josieheldherfather’shandandmovedclosertothebeggar.Josiefoundthebeggarwasanoleblindmanandhissignread,”Iamblind,pleasehelp”therewereonlyafewcoinsinthehat.Josie’sfathertookafewcoinsfromhispocketanddroppedthemintothehat.”weneedtogo,honey,oryou’llbelateforschool.”Thefatherheldthegirl’shandandtheyleft,butlittleJosieturnedherheadseveraltimesuntiltheyturnedlefttoanotherstreetandtheblindmanwasinvisible.
;“Iwanttohelpthepooroldman.”Josiewasthinkingabouthowtohelpthepooroldmanthewholeday.At3.00p.m.intheafternoon,Josie’sfathershowedupattheschoolgatetopickupJosie.“Iwanttohelpthepoorman.”Josietoldherfather.“butIhavenoidea.”itwasthewarmesttimeofthecoldday.Thesunwascastingitswarmlightgenerouslyonthefatherandthedaughter.
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;二、十句提纲法10-5-1-6;P1:Suddenly,anideaoccurredtoJosiethatshecouldchangethewordsontheman’ssign.
;1.她认为牌子上的话太平淡，不能激发路人的同情心。;3.虽然感到很困惑，但爸爸还是同意了，他们一起回到了乞丐身旁。;6.牌子上的话虽然简单，但对路人触动很大。;9.Josie和爸爸站在远处看着这一切，一股满足感涌上心头，因为他们知道他们让这个男的的一天发生了改变。;Thankyou