Learnaboutoptimismandperseverance;PerceBlackborowsdiary;;;;Predict;ThisisacontinuationofthestoryofShackletonsmenwhowereleftonElephantisland.Predictwhatthe22crewmemberswouldsufferonElephantIsland.;IfyouwereoneofthecrewmembersonElephantIsland,

howcouldyoucheeryourselvesupinsuchamiserableplace?;;Amemoirisanarrativewritten（记叙文）aboutanimportant

eventintheauthorslifethataffectedtheminsomeway.;Para1;Para2;Para3;Para4;Problemstheyfaced;Para5;;IfyouwereoneofthemenonEleplantIsland,wouldyouhavetrustedShackleton?Whyorwhynot?;Whatwerethekeyreasonsforthecrewmembers’survival?;;StructureMainIdea;Whatimpressedyoumostaboutthestory?;

;;首段：简介故事

中段：引用原文情节，分析人物性格

尾段：自己的印象和感受;请根据下面的提示写一篇短评。

1.欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们一起登上了名字为“坚忍”号的大船。途中“坚忍”号被冰山困住了，大家弃船后逃到了大象岛。沙克尔顿驾船去寻求帮助。最后，尽管困难重重船员们还是活了下来。

2.在这个故事里面船员之间真诚的关心和爱以及他们在困难面前的忍耐力和毅力也使我深受鼓舞。

3.从这个故事中我学到一个教训：无论遇到任何困难，都不要放弃！;第一步审题谋篇;[谋篇];__________

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_______;;;5.尽管他们陷入了恐慌，也有许多困难，全体人员设法活了下来。(panic)

，thecrewmanagedtosurvive.

6.从这个鼓舞人心的故事中我学到一个重要的教训。(lesson)

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7.将来万一我们遇到困难，我们绝不放弃。(giveup)

，wewouldnevergiveup.;第三步句式升级;3.用非谓语动词改写句3。;第四步组句成篇;SampleWriting

Thisstoryisaboutthe1914-1916expeditionbyEarnestShackletontomakethefirstlandcrossingofAntarctica.

ErnestShackletonandhiscrewwentaboardtheshipnamedEndurance.AstheyapproachedAntarctica,unfortunately,theirshipgotstuckintheice,sinkingintothesea.Havingabandonedtheship,theyescapedtoElephantIsland.Shackletonleftthemtofindhelp,and