;在读后续写中,第二段结尾至关重要,除揭示故事结局外,还应与原文伏笔呼应,使人觉得在情理之中。常用结尾方式有以下4种:
1.哲理式结尾:总结文章中心,通过哲理性的语言结尾点明中心,升华主题。通过以小见大、从物到人、由事及人等方式升华文章主题。
2.正能量结尾:结尾句呼应原文主题,且一定要体现正能量。
3.以景结情:在续写中通过寓情于景的描写,使所写环境和人物心情相照应。
4.自然结尾:顺着文章所叙之事自然发展,以其必然结果结尾,简单自然。
;【典例示范】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
AVacationwithMyMother
Ihadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymother—loving,sweet,andyetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.
;MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveller’schecksMumhadforgotten.
;DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMumwasdrivingwhileDadslept:“YoustandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.
;Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Mumsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetupatentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Mumnevercouldunderstandourobjections.Ifastrange