读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
InGrade9Ijoinedboxingclasses.MyfriendLeaandIweretheonlygirlsintheclass.
Wegottothrowourfirstpunches(拳击)andlearnedhowweshouldstand.Istilldidn’tknowhowtodoitwell,butIfeltthatchoosingtheboxingclasswasarightdecision.Mr.Vernon,ourboxingteacher,madeusworkhardandsweat.Theboxingpads(防护垫)weremyfavorite,butmypunchesweren’tstrongenough.
Afterparticipatinginmorepractices,wehadlearnedhowtopunchinsixdifferentways.Theboyswereimprovingalotontheirstrength,andLeawithherspeed.Whataboutme?Well,Ihadahardtimeseeingthedifference.Mr.Vernonwouldalwaystellmethatpracticewouldmakemestronger,andthiswaswhathelpedmotivatemetocontinue.
Eachpracticetherewasatleastoneboywhowouldmakefunofmeandsay,“Oh,you’retooshorttobox.Mr.Vernonhastobenddownwhenyouareontheboxingpads;oh,you’renotstrongenough;youpunchlikeamouse.”
Iknowthosecommentswerenottohurtme,butjusttohavefun.It’strue.I’masmallandshortpersonandIdidlackconfidence;buthearingthosecommentscaneitherbringyoudown,ormakeyoufeelmotivatedtoshowthemtheyarewrong.Inmycase,theystartedtodiscourageme.Ididn’thavethestrengthtothinktheywerewrong,andpartofmethoughtthattheywerespeakingthetruth.IhiditinsidemyheartbecauseIthoughtthatshowingIwasdoubtingmyselfwouldmakeitworse.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Thencameoneparticularpractice.
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Theexperiencetaughtmeagreatlesson.
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拳击课经历续写
续写分析
第一段分析(160字):第一段以“Thencameoneparticularpractice”自然衔接上文,开启关键情节。作者通过“pairedmewithaboy”设置冲突,紧接着用“palmssweating”细腻刻画“我”紧张恐惧的心