;【写作导引】
本单元以“学校生活”为话题,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及:①校园设施与环境;②介绍学习与活动;③就如何改善学校生活提出建议。;【写作任务】
假设你是某国际学校的学生会成员李华,发现学校图书馆存在以下问题:
1.开放时间较短,无法满足学生课后需求;2.科技类书籍陈旧;3.缺少安静学习区。
请以学生会名义给王校长写一封90词左右的建议信。;【精彩范文】
DearMrWang,
Iamwritingthislettertomakesuggestionsonhowtoimproveourschoollibrary.
First,Iwouldliketosuggestkeeping1thelibraryopenlonger.Ifitstaysopenuntil6:30p.m.,morestudentscanstudyorborrowbooksafterschool.3Second,Ithinkitwillbeagoodideatoaddnewbooks.4;Manybooksinthelibraryareold,especiallyinscienceandtechnology.Buyingnewerbooksandpopularstorybookswouldmakestudentsmoreinterestedinreading.Moreover,Ihaveasuggestionforcreatingaquietarea.Aspecialquietspacewouldhelpstudentswhoneedtopayattentionto2theirhomeworkorexams.5;Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestionsuseful.Thesechangescanmakeourlibrarymorehelpfulandfun.Thankyouforreadingmyideas!
Yourssincerely,
LiHua;亮点词块
1suggestdoing建议做……
2payattentionto专心于;高分句子
3含if引导的条件状语从句
4含省略that的宾语从句
5含who引导的定语从句;跟踪演练
假设你是一名八年级学生张伟,请根据下面提示给张校长写一封建议信,针对学校生活的多个方面提出改进建议,词数不少于90。
要点:1.早晨到校时间过早(7:30开始上课,学生疲惫);2.食堂饭菜质量不佳(部分菜品不美味、不健康);3.图书馆藏书不足(缺乏有趣的新书);4.体育设施有限(如仅有1个篮球场)。;DearMr.Zhang,
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Yourssincerely,
ZhangWei;______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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