Unit1Peoplearoundus(Thewritinglesson)

ObjectivesofthisclassBytheendofthisclass,youwillbeableto:1.knowthestructureofapassageaboutaperson.2.usedifferentwords,phrasesaswellassentencepatternstodescribeaperson.3.polish(改进)apassageaboutaperson.4.understandthefightingspiritofChineseOlympicathletes.

Shehasbigblueeyes.She’saverycutefox.LinabellAguessinggame

Heistallandthin.Helikesshorttrackspeedskating.(短道速滑)WuDajingHealwayshelpsothersandwontheonlygoldmedalforChinainthe2018PyeongchangWinterOlympics.

Sheisabeautifulyounggirl.ShewontwogoldmedalsinBeijingWinterOlympics.PeopleinChinaallloveher.GuAiling

GuAilingisasuperstarinChinanow.Sheisafreestyleskier.Sheistallandthin.Sheisverybeautiful.Asanathlete,Guisveryhard-working.SheisalsoastudentandshecanspeakEnglishandChinese.Shedoesagoodjobbothinsportsandstudies.SheisalsogoodatplayingthepianoandsheeventookpartinMarathoncompetitions.GuAilingisamodelforallteenagers.Weallloveher.structureBasicinformationPersonalityandexperienceSummaryandopinion三段论作文

Howcanwemakethispassageintoabetterone?

1.wordsphrases2.sentences3.passage1.appearance2.personality3.opinion

Wordsandphrasestodescribeappearance

Shehasbigblueeyes.She’saverycutefox.adorable(adj.)惹人喜爱的lovelyShe’saveryadorablefoxwithbigblueeyes.beautifulprettycharming(adj.)迷人的good-lookinghandsomenottallofmediumheight(中等身高的)Lucyisacharminggirlwithlongblackhair.Lucyisabeautifulgirl.Shehaslongblackhair.

Wordsandphrasestodescribepersonality

Helikesshorttrackspeedskating.Heiscrazyaboutshorttrackspeedskating.Healwayshelpsothers.Healwaysgivesothersahand(伸出援手).goodkindnicewarm-hearteddiligent(adj.)勤奋的wonderfulexcellent(adj.)杰出的hard-workingMorewords:helpfulconfident(adj.自信的