专题12读后续写十句五定法写大纲+四步设计补全情节

一、两段十句五定法的思路

Para1.Para2.

定句1：衔提示句--心理/动作链定句6:衔提示句--心理/动作链

句2:句7:

句3:句8：

句4:定句9:紧贴原文，交代结局

定句5:过渡到P2首句定句10：点睛

其中第一段中的句1与句5,第二段中的句1,句4和句5共五句话基本是固定的，其他的句子安排根据具

体情况可作轻微调整。

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