中考英语书面表达专练
祝贺信
【真题示例】
(2018·北京海淀·统考一模)假如你是李华,在你的帮助下,交换生Tom在中文演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。请你给他写一封祝贺信,表达你的真诚祝贺,回忆他比赛时的表现,以及你从他身上学到了什么。
提示词语:win,prize,speechcompetition,pronounce,practice
提示问题:
WhydoyoucongratulateTom?
Whatmadehimsuccessfulinthecompetition?
Whatcanyoulearnfromhim?
【参考范文】
DearTom,
IamveryhappytoknowthatyouwonthefirstprizeintheChinesespeechcompetition,soI’mwritingtocongratulateyouonyourwonderfulperformance.
YoudidagoodjobintheChinesespeechcompetition.Youpronouncedreallywellduringyourspeechandyourvoicewasbeautiful.Youspokesofluentlythatweallfeltproudofyou.What’smore,weweresurprisedatyourrichandmeaningfulcontents.
Asyourbestfriend,Iknowyoutriedyourbestforthecompetition.Youkeptpracticingyourspeecheverydayinordertomakeitbetter.Iknowitisimportanttokeepontryingandnevertogiveup.IhopeIcanbesuccessfullikeyouonedayinthefuture.
Yours,
LiHua
【写作分析】本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式,采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确,简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【写作反思】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如:tryone’s??best;What’smore,feelproudof;inorderto;giveup;keepontrying.;Itisimportanttokeepontryingandnevertogiveup等;so;so···that等连词的运用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理;同时语言流畅,内容完整,是一篇不错的范文。
【必背句式】
开头常用句式
Itwasexcitingnewsformetolearnof…
Pleaseacceptmysincere/hearty/warmcongratulationson…
Itwasagreatpleasuretosendyoumycongratulationson…
Iwasdelightedtolearnofyoursuccess/achievementsin…
Iamreallyhappytolearnthatyouhavebeenelected…
结尾常用句式
Wishyougoodluck!
Wewishtoshareyourhonorandjoy.
Iwishyousuccessandfulfillmentintheyearsahead.
Mayallgowonderfullyinyournewpost!
Mayeveryhappinessbeyours!
Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture/successfulcareer!
Mayeachsucceedingyearbringyougreathappinessandprosperity.
Everygoodwishtoyouformuchhealth,happiness,andprosperi