备战2023年中考英语高分作文

热点05中华美食

一、话题作文

1．年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭。年夜饭菜肴丰富、美味，像年糕（NewYearcake）、鱼等都还带有美好的祝愿。

请以TheFamilyDinneronSpringFestivalEve为题，写一篇约100词的短文，向外国朋友介绍自己家乡的年夜饭，让他们更好地了解中国丰富多样的文化习俗。

注意：文中不可出现人名。标题已经给出，不计入总词数。

TheFamilyDinneronSpringFestivalEve

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【参考范文】

TheFamilyDinneronSpringFestivalEve

ThefamilydinneronSpringFestivalEveisthemostimportantdinnerintraditionalChineseculture.OnSpringFestivalEve,familymembersgettogethertoenjoythedinner.

Thereareallkindsofdeliciousfoodanddrinks.Manyofthemusuallyhavegreatmeanings.Forexample,inWenzhou,NewYearcakeisoftenthefirstdish,whichmeanshavingmoreluckandbecomingbetterinChinesepronunciation.Anotherdishisfish,whichmeanshavingmorethanweneed.Childrenalllikethisfamilydinner.Atdinnertheyreceivenotonlybestwishesbutalsoluckymoneyfromtheirparents.

ItisaChinesetraditionthatwehavekeptforthousandsofyears.

【详解】题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“TheFamilyDinneronSpringFestivalEve”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。

点评：采用三段式；时态以一般现在时为主；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。

高分亮点：

短语：gettogether；allkindsof；Forexample；thousandsof等。

句型：Forexample,inWenzhou,NewYearcakeisoftenthefirstdish