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单元话题满分范文必背

基础语篇巩固练

1．（24-25高一上·吉林通化·阶段练习）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Bill发来邮件关心你的学校生活。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：

1.你对新高中学校的印象；

2.你在高中的学习情况；

3.询问他的建议。

注意：1.词数80字左右；

2.可适当增加细节，不能出现个人信息；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearBill,

Ifeelexceptionallydelightedtohearfromyou.Ireallyappreciateyourconcern.

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【答案】DearBill,

Ifeelexceptionallydelightedtohearfromyou.Ireallyappreciateyourconcern.

Mynewhighschoolisvastandbeautifulwithamazingteachingbuildingsandmodernfacilities.It’saplacethatcreatesagoodlearningenvironment.

Asformystudy,Ihadtroublecatchingupwithothersatfirst.ButIsoonovercamemyproblemwiththehelpofmyteachers,whoareknowledgeableandpatient.AndIevenjoinastudygroup,inwhichallofussupportandlearnfromeachother.

I’mdeterminedtoenjoymyacademicyearshere,soI’dlovetohearyouradviceonhowtomanagetimeandhowtostudyefficiently.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国笔友Bill回邮件，介绍对新高中学校的印象、高中学习情况，并询问对方建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted→happy/glad

克服：overcome→conquer/surmount

帮助：help→assistance/aid

建议：advice→suggestion

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Mynewhighschoolisvastandbeautifulwithamazingteachingbuildingsandmodernfacilities.

拓展句：Mynewhighschool,whichislocatedinapeacefularea,isvastandbeautifulwithamazingteachingbuildingsandmodernfacilities.

【点睛】[高分句型1]It’saplacethatcreatesagoodlearningenvironment.(运用了关系代词that引导限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2]ButIsoonovercamemyproblemwiththehelpofmyteachers,whoareknowledgeableandpatient.(运用了关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型3]AndIevenjoinastudygroup,inwhichallofussupportandlearnfromeachother.(运用了inw