高考英语复习备考：2022年10月杭州一模读后续写精讲分析

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Onalateafternoon,Brandonfinishedfeedinghiscowsonthefarmanddecidedtogobackwithhistwosons,Louie,6,andEverett,3.Astheyheadedforthehouse,thetwoboysranaheadoftheirfather.SuddenlyBrandonwasawareheforgottoclosethedoorofthebarn(牲口棚).Hetoldtheboystowaitforhimatthegateandreturnedtolockit.Whenhewasatthegateminuteslater,hesawonlyhisyoungestson.

“WheresLouie?”heshouted.

Hefellinthehole!Everettsaid.

Brandonquicklyrealizedwhathadhappened.Noooo,hethought.Louiecanbarelyswim!HerantothewellandheardLouiesplashing,tryingnottodrown.Instinctively,hejumpedin.

SomehowBrandonmanagedtograbontoapipethatrandownthesideofthewell,whichslowedhisfallandkepthimfromcrushing(挤压)hisson.

Finally,Brandonhitthefreezingwateratthebottomofthewell.HepoppedhisheadoutofthewaterandgrabbedLouie,whowaspanickingandtryingtostayafloatinwaterthatwastoodeepforeitherofthemtostand.Knowingtheycouldtread(踩水)foronlysolong,Brandonliftedhissonontohischestashepackedhisownbackagainstthenarrowwallsforsupport.

Allright,Dad,youcanpullusoutnow,Louiesaid.

Ifonlyitwerethateasy.Therewasnowayhecouldclimbout.Thepipethathedgrabbedduringhisfallwastooslipperytobeofanyuse.There