5.1读后续写:情节内在的总分逻辑
試題呈現阅读材料,根据内容和所给段落开头续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Astheschoolyearwrappedupandthefirstdaysofsummervacationstretchedoutbeforethem,Max,Ava,andSamhadaperfectdayplannedattheirusualcommunitypark.Thistidylittleparkwastheirgo-tospotforunwindingandjustenjoyingsomepreciousleisuretime.
Maxrushedaheadwithasoccerballunderhisarm,AvaandSamtrailingcloselybehind,fullofenergy.Itwasthekindofdaythatpromisedendlessfunandcarefreelaughter.Butastheysteppedintothepark,theirheartsank.Theonce-belovedplaygroundwasnowachaoticmessofdiscardedtrash(乱扔的垃圾)-candywrappersstuckintheslide’smetalbars,plasticbottlesrollinginthewind,andchipbagslyingunderfoot.
Lookatthis!Avashoutedindisbeliefasshepointedtothegarbageneartheswings.
Max’sfacedarkenedwithfrustration.Thethreefriendsstoodfrozen,theireyesscanningtheplaygroundarea.Theoncecleanslidesandswingswerenowburiedunderalayerofcandywrappersandplasticbottles.Avacastaglance(瞥一眼)atthewalkingtrails,wheregarbageseemedtohavetakenover,withdiscardedbagsandcanslyingeverywhere.Samlookedoutatthegrassyfields-adisaster.Theparkwasvast,buteverycornerseemedtohavebeentouchedbythecarelessnessofothers.
Whowouldbesothoughtless?Maxwhispered,shakinghishead.
Samkickedaplasticbottleinanger,sendingitflyingacrossthegrass.It’snotjustthoughtless-it’sdisrespectful.
Avasighedthoughtfullybutsuddenlyherfacelitup.Wecan’tjustleaveitlikethis.Whydon’twedosomethingaboutit?Wecan,say,formaCleanupSquad(清洁小分队)...shesaid,hervoicesoftbutdetermined.【段-】
MaxandSamexchangedanexcitedglance.
Theyagreedwithhersuggestion.
TheideaofbecomingaCleanupSquadgavethemasenseofpurposetheyhadn’texpectedthatmorning.
Sotheystartedcleaninguptheplayground.
Inminutes,theirfrustrationwasreplacedbyim