高三英语一轮复习读后续写高分必备结构讲义
一、动作描写核心结构与拓展示例
1.同主语动作链进阶训练
(1)三连动作逻辑扩展
标准结构:主语+谓语A(核心动作),谓语B(伴随动作)and谓语C(结果动作)
?例1:Thehikerdroppedhisbackpack,wipedthesweatoffhisforehead,andcollapsedontotherock.
(徒步者扔下背包,擦去额头的汗水,瘫倒在岩石上。)
?例2:Sheflippedthroughthephotoalbum,pausedatafamilypicture,andtracedherfingeralongtheedges.
(她翻着相册,在一张全家福前停顿,用手指划过边缘。)
(2)非谓语动作分层技巧
同时性动作:主+谓,doingsth.(强调次要动作伴随)
?例:Theactressstoodonthestage,wavingtotheaudienceandsmilingbrightly.
(女演员站在舞台上,向观众挥手并灿烂微笑。)
先后性动作:Havingdonesth.,主+谓(突出动作完成先后)
?例:Havingmissedthelastbus,shecalledataxiandheadedhomereluctantly.
(错过末班车后,她叫了出租车,不情愿地回家。)
被动性动作:Donesth.,主+谓(强调动作承受状态)
?例:Frightenedbythesuddenthunder,thedoghidunderthebedandwhimperedsoftly.
(被突然的雷声吓到,狗躲在床底轻轻呜咽。)
2.独立主格结构深度解析
异主语动作组合:
结构:次要主语+非谓语(done/doing/介词短语),主要主语+谓语
?例1:Thewindhowlingwildly,thesailorstightenedtheropesandbracedforthestorm.
(狂风呼啸,水手们拉紧绳索,准备迎接风暴。)
?例2:Herhomeworkhalf-finished,Lilystaredoutthewindow,lostinthought.
(作业完成一半,莉莉望着窗外,陷入沉思。)
二、情绪描写多维框架与场景应用
1.介词短语情感表达库
(1)with/without+情感名词
情感类型
例词
例句示范
愤怒
anger,fury
Getout!heshoutedwithfury.
尴尬
embarrassment,shame
Sheapologizedwithembarrassment.
决心
determination,resolve
Heleftwithouthesitation.
(2)toone’s+情感名词
固定搭配
中文释义
场景例句
toone’srelief
令某人如释重负
Toourrelief,themissingchildreturned.
toone’shorror
令某人恐惧的是
Toherhorror,sherealizedshewaslost.
toone’sastonishment
令某人惊讶的是
Toeveryone’sastonishment,hewonthegame.
2.无灵主语情感隐喻体系
(1)抽象情感名词+动态动词
高频动词:seize(侵袭),flood(淹没),sweepover(席卷),wellup(涌出)
?例1:Asurgeofguiltseizedherwhenshesawthebrokenvase.
(看到打碎的花瓶,一阵愧疚感攫住了她。)
?例2:Awaveofnostalgiafloodedoverhimattheoldsong.
(听到老歌,一股怀旧之情涌上他的心头。)
(2)身体部位+情感动词
部位名词
动词搭配
情感场景示范
eyes
cloudover(蒙上水汽)
Hereyescloudedoverwithtears.
hands
tremble/shake(颤抖)
Hishandsshookwithexcitement.
heart
pound/thump(怦怦跳)
Myheartthumpedloudlyi