1.opponent2.cheat3.seize4.intense5.followinone’sfootsteps6.setouttodo7.burstontoDictation8.afarcryfrom9.inarow10.beassignedto11.gowild12.payoff13.giveway14.associate名词15.remark形容词16.cooperate名词和形容词17.他看着凯瑟琳,满眼忧伤。18.她拿着信,双手颤抖,眼睛流露出被完全遗忘的深深悲伤。
如何生动写句子读后续写之主讲人:米江
目录CONTENTS情绪模板01-语言模板02-动作模板03-情感升华04-
语言表达微技能:点线面升级法具体的某个动作点线将动作进行拆解形成一条动作链多面立体化动作描写情绪描写心理描写语言描写面
情绪模板1.情绪描写+心理描写/语言描写/动作描写adjandadj,主+谓,非谓语(1)Frustratedanddepressed/upset,Iwentbackhome,unwillingcontributemyhard-earnedcashtothefamilyexpense.沮丧又失落,我回到家,不愿意贡献辛苦挣来的工资贴补家用。(2)__________and__________,wealmost__________there,__________thatthegiantanimalwoulddestroyourwholefenceandbiteusfiercely.?又慌张又害怕,我们愣在那里,害怕这个巨型动物会毁了我们的整个篱笆狠狠咬我们一口。(3)__________and__________,Jane__________nearastone,__________herfamilyatadistance.?又累又怕,Jane靠着一块石头躺下了,好想念远方的家。AlarmedpanickedfrozefearingExhaustedscaredlaydownmissing
情绪模板1.情绪描写+心理描写/语言描写/动作描写?With+adj.+n.,主+谓,(非谓语)(1)Withgreatcuriosityandexpectation,Ienteredthehouse,wonderingifIcouldencountermyoldfriend。心怀好奇和期待,我进了屋子,想知道我是不是能遇到我的老朋友。(2)With____________________,mom_________thatweshouldmakefulluseofitandfindanicecampingplace.带着兴奋的表情,妈妈坚持说我们应该好好利用帐篷。(3)She__________withendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwith_______________________________.她心里焦虑后悔万分,眼里含着泪花睡着了。anexcitedlookinsistedregrettedshiningtearsinhereyes
情绪模板1.情绪描写+心理描写/语言描写/动作描写Toone’s+(adj.)+n.,主+谓+...让人…的是(1)Tohergreatsurpriseandexcitement,ahelicopterwasflyingoverheadagainandagain.Eagerandthrilled,sheflaggedheryellowblouseandsparednoefforttoyellsoastoattracttherescuers’attention.?让他无比惊讶又激动的是,一架直升机在上空来回盘旋。焦急又激动,她用力挥舞黄色的衬衣,拼劲全力的吸引救援者们的关注。(2)___________________,myfriendwasnowhereinthehouse.令我惊讶的是,我的朋友在房子里无处可去。(3)___________________,thefuriousbearsucceededinescapingthespayandtriedbesttoteardownthefenc