专题14应用文写作(新高考)
2024年高考真题
Writing1
【新课标ⅠⅠⅠ卷】假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）你完成的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
DearChris,
I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.
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Yours,
LiHua
【答案】
DearChris,
I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.
Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.
Theentireexperiencewasincrediblyrefreshing.Beingsurroundedbynaturenotonlysparkedmycreativitybutalsoofferedamuch-neededbreakfromtheusualhustleandbustleofschoollife.IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.
Inaword,Itwasnotjustanartclass;itwasamomentofconnectionwithnaturethatItrulycherished.
Yours,
LiHua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信,分享在公园上美术课的经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
决定：decide→determine
整个的：entire→whole
提供：offer→provide
总之：inaword→inshort
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.
拓展句：BecauseIwasinspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,whichwassurroundedbybloomingflowers.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.(that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpai