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读后续写:面对公园的脏乱讲义

读后续写

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Astheschoolyearwrappedupandthefirstdaysof?summervacationstretchedoutbefore?them,?Max,?Ava,?andSamhadaperfectdayplanned?attheirusualcommunitypark.Thistidy?littleparkwastheirgo-tospotforunwindingandjustenjoyingsomepreciousleisuretime.

Maxrushedaheadwithasoccerballunderhisarm,?AvaandSamtrailingcloselybehind,?fullofenergy.?Itwasthekindofdaythatpromised?endlessfunandcarefreelaughter.?Butas?theysteppedintothepark,?theirheartsank.?Theonce-belovedplaygroundwasnowachaotic?messofdiscardedtrash(乱扔的垃圾)—candywrappersstuckintheslidesmetalbars,?plasticbottlesrollinginthewind,?andchipbagslyingunderfoot.

“Lookatthis!”?Avashoutedindisbeliefasshepointedtothegarbageneartheswings.Maxsfacedarkenedwithfrustration.Thethreefriendsstoodfrozen,theireyesscanningtheplaygroundarea.Theoncecleanslidesandswingswerenowburiedunderalayerofcandywrappersandplasticbottles.Avacastaglance(瞥一眼)atthewalkingtrails,wheregarbageseemedtohavetakenover,?withdiscardedbagsandcanslyingeverywhere.Samlookedoutatthegrassyfields—adisaster.?Theparkwasvast,buteverycornerseemedtohavebeentouchedbythecarelessnessofothers.

“Whowouldbesothoughtless?”Maxwhispered,?shakinghishead.

Samkickedaplasticbottleinanger,?sendingitflyingacrossthegrass.“Itsnotjust?thoughtless—itsdisrespectful.”

Avasighedthoughtfullybutsuddenlyherfacelitup.?“Wecantjustleaveitlikethis.Whydontwedosomethingaboutit?Wecan,say,formaCleanupSquad(清洁小分队)…”shesaid,hervoicesoftbutdetermined.

注意:

1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Para.1?MaxandSamexchangedanexcitedglance.

Para.2?Unexpectedly,otherparkersjoinedinastheydidthecleanup.

情节发展:

开端:故事以学校学年结束,暑假开始为背景,Max、Ava和Sam计划在常去的社区公园度过完美的一天。他们满心期待地前往公园,此时公园在他们心中是放松休闲的好去处,为故事营造了轻松愉快的氛围。

冲突:当他们踏入公园,却发现