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读后续写:善意与帮助讲义

读后续写(2025石家庄高三一模)

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Ms.Carter’sclassroomwasalwayswarm,eveninwinter.Thewallswerecoveredwithstudentessaysandfadedworldmaps.14-year-oldJamiesatinthebackrow,hisheadhanginglowandeyesfixedonhiswornshoes.Hehadn’tturnedinhisassignmentsforseveraldays.

“Stayafterclass,Jamie,”Ms.CartersaidsoftlyoneDecemberafternoon.Hervoicewasn’tangry—justworried.“Iknowyou’recapable,”shesaid,slidinghisblanknotebookacrossthedesk.“Butyou’vemissedeverydeadline.Isthereanythingwrong?”

Jamie,strugglingwithsomethinghecouldntexpress,heldbackhiswordsandremainedsilent.Outside,raindropstappedthewindowslikeimpatientfingers.

Thenextday,Ms.CarterdrovetoJamie’shomeafterschool.Assheknockedonahalf-opendoor,sheheardachild’scry.Jamieansweredherknock.HewassosurprisedtoseeMs.Carter,hisfaceredwithpanic.Ababygirlwasonhisback,andanoxygenmachinehummedbesideasofawhereaweakwomanslept.

“Mymom...shehaspneumonia(肺炎),”Jamieexplainedinalowvoice,blockingthedoorway.“Ihavetotakecareofmysisterafterschool.ThedaycarekickedheroutlastmonthbecauseMommissedpayments.Yousee,shecan’tgotoworknow.”

Ms.Carter’sthroattightened.Shenoticedthemicrowavemealspiledonthetable.AphotoonthefridgeshowedJamiewearingabigsmile,hismother’sarmsaroundhim—alifetimeago.

“Whydidn’tyoutellme?”

“You’dthinkI’mlying,”hesaid,voiceshaking.“But...I’llcatchuponmystudy,Ipromise.”

Thatevening,afterreturninghome,Ms.Cartercontactedacharityorganizationinthetownandexplainedthefamily’sdifficultsituation.TheorganizationreadilypromisedtohelpJamieandhisfamily.Thenextday,theheadoftheorganizationcametotheschoolwithfundsinanenvelope,whichwereenoughtocovertheexpensesofdaycareforatleastonemonth.

第一段:Ms.CartercalledJamiet