考研真題作文
Directions:
A.Studythefollowingtwopicturescarefullyandwriteanessayofatleast150words.
B.Youressayshouldmeettherequirementsbelow:
OUTLINE:
1.Describethepictures.
2.Deducethepurposeofthedrawerofthepictures.
3.Suggestyourcounter-measures.?
(15points)
[审題解題]
的考研写作考察的是图画作文,它标志着真正意义上的图画作文考察的开始。这是继1998年之后第二次考图画作文,也是之后持续考察图画作文的开始,98年的图画作文并不经典,由于包括的文字(包括图画内的和图画边的)太多;从起,就变得言简意赅了。
这里給出了两张图画,形成了强烈的对比:19只有一艘打魚的船只,魚儿却诸多;到了1995年,船只成群,而魚儿却只剩一只了。这里給人的震撼是巨大的,在数年的商业打魚之后,渔业资源受到了巨大的破坏。
提纲共有三点,第一点是描述图画,第二点是推断画家的意图,第三点給出对策,也就是处理措施。我們应当根据提纲来构建文章的三个段落。
[关键詞汇]
alertusto…
thediminishingfisheryresources…
ensurethemoderateexplorationandreasonabledispositionofnaturalresources
destructiveecologicaldisaster
heightenawareness
[组詞成句]
第二段的首句紧紧紧围绕住了提纲的第二点,也出了绘画者的用意:
Itismostobviousthatthedrawermeanstoalertustothediminishingfisheryresourcesbecauseofexcessiveglobalcommercialfishing.
句中的most表达“非常”,語气要强于very,mean背面加不定式時表达“意欲,想要做某事”,alertusto…表达“使得我們对…有所警惕”,diminishingfisheryresources表达“曰益枯竭的渔业资源”,excessive表达“过度的”。
Thepicture,“abriefhistoryofcommercialfishing”,showsusthattherearelessandlessfishintheriverwithinthelastcentury.Thetwopartsthatcomprisethepicturedisplaytotallydifferentscenesin1990and1995.In1990therewerealargenumberoffishwhileonlyoneboatfishedontheriver.Butin1995fishingboatsincreasedsubstantiallywhileonlyonefishwasleftintheriver.Deducingaccordingly,wewillinevitablecometotheconclusionthatnofishwillbeleftforourdescendantsorusinthefuture.
Itismostobviousthatthedrawermeanstowarnusagainsttheexhaustingfishresourcebecauseofexcessivecommercialfishing.Infact,allnaturalresourcesarelimited.Excessiveexplorationwithoutpreservingwillcausetheexhaustionofthemandfinallyresultindestructivedisastertomankindhimself.
Therefore,itishightimewetookactiveandeffectivemeasurestoso