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【读后续写】暑假晨背晚练—语言描写Day2
“漂亮地说”
晨背——素材积累
在对话标签中加入语气、嗓音、情感以及伴随动作，让你的描写更生动传神。
对话＋语气（tone）
①ina/an+形容词+tone
②inatoneof+名词
例句：
“YoumustbeAnnie,”hesaidinafriendlytone.
“Iwouldloveto,”saidEmilyinapleasanttone.
“Idon’twantto,”saidEmilyinatoneofimpatience.
“NoIdidn’t,”hesaidinalowtone.
对话＋嗓音（voice）
ina/an+形容词+voice
例句：
“Ididn’tmeanto,”shemurmuredinalowvoice.
“Idon’tknowwhatyoumean,”saidFraninaquaveringvoice.
Hecalledoutinaloudvoice.
Thewomanatthedeskgreetedhiminaboredvoice.
对话＋介词短语/副词
①介词短语
in:
insurprise/shock/sorrow/horror/anger
with:
withdelight/excitement/embarrassment/pride/caution/care/patience/certainty
②副词
firmly/excitedly/seriously/sincerely/slowly/regretfully
例句：
“We’renotintrouble!”Ishoutedwithjoy.
“Ihateyou!”shescreamedinanger.
“Isittrue?”hewhisperedwithastonishment.
“I’vebeenwaitingforyou,”shesaidwithasmile.
“Getoverherethisinstant!”Davidcalledfiercely.
“Itisn’tfair!”heexclaimedangrily.
“Youaremyhero!”Kyliesaidaffectionately.
“Ifeellikeyou’reabandoningme,”sherespondedbitterly.
对话＋伴随动作
“Nobodycouldunderstandme!”Andysobbed,buryinghisfaceinhishands.
Thefarmerpickedupthedog,kneltdownandsaidinasoftvoice,“It’syoursnow.”
Withherheaddown/Withtearsinhereyes,shesaid,“Sorry.”
“Hi,Sandy.I’msorryaboutthespaghettithing.”Catherinemurmuredanapology,herfacereddening.
“Wanttotryoneon?”Isaid,touchingMarina’shand.
Thewomaninthecarjumpedout,screaming,“Youidiot!Whydidn’tyoulookwhereyouweregoing?”
晚练——素材运用
运用晨读板块的四个对话描写技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。
Asthetwinslookedaroundindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Atthesightofthemessandthekids’gloomyfaces,heimmediatelyrealizedwhattheywereupto.“Needanyhelp?”1(爸爸微笑地看着双胞胎，温柔地问),whofeltdiscouragedatbeingfoundscrewingthingsup.Jeffstammeredouttheirfailedplan,2(