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DearWangMin,
I’mgladtolearnthatyouareabouttohaveanexchangetripwithyourEnglishSiblingSchoolnextmonth.Yourideatoshootashortvideotointroduceyourschoolcomesasathrilltome,andI’mjusttoowillingtogivemyopiniononthevideo.
Generally,agoodvideoisalwaysaccompaniedbyanexcellenttopic.Isuggestthetopic“Chineseculture”.Giventheculturaldifference,Englishstudentsmusthavegreatinterestinatotallydifferentculture.
Whenitcomestothecontentsofthevideo,Istronglyrecommendyoutoincludeourafter-schoolclubs.Amongthem,IthinkthatyoushouldhighlighttheChinesePoetryClubtoconveytheeleganceandspiritsofourancestors’poems.NotonlycanithelpBritishstudentsknowmoreaboutourwell-organizedclubs,butitcanalsobridgethegapbetweenthecultures,thusenhancingtheBritishstudents’understandingofourcountry.
Additionally,shootingthevideointhecanteenisboundtoaddabrillianttouchtothewholevideo.FromthevariousanddeliciousChinesedishes,Britishstudentscanhaveabetterunderstandingofthedifferentculture.Ourdailyfood,whichgivesthemappetite,willsurelyarousetheirinterestandconveythetopicofChinesecultureinamorecomprehensiveway.
Hopemyadvicecanbeofsomehelpandwishyouasuccessfulandmeaningfulexchangevisit!
Yours,sincerely
ChengFang
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DearWangMin,
I’veheardfromyouthatyou’repreparingtoshootavideotointroduceourschooltothesiblingschoolinBritainandareaskingforadviceonthemainthemeandthecontentsconcerned.I’meagertooffermysuggestion.
Ithinkthethemeshouldfocusontheatmosphereandactivitiesinourschool,andnaturallythecontentsshouldcontainthecharacteristicsoftheacademicatmosphereinyourschoolandthefeaturesoftheattractiveactivities.
Inthefirstplace,Ithinkitofgreatimportancetoshowhowlearningisconductedinou