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2021届优秀作文分享4

设计类

二、全区优秀作文分享

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(1)

DearWangMin,

I’mgladtolearnthatyouareabouttohaveanexchangetripwithyourEnglishSiblingSchoolnextmonth.Yourideatoshootashortvideotointroduceyourschoolcomesasathrilltome,andI’mjusttoowillingtogivemyopiniononthevideo.

Generally,agoodvideoisalwaysaccompaniedbyanexcellenttopic.Isuggestthetopic“Chineseculture”.Giventheculturaldifference,Englishstudentsmusthavegreatinterestinatotallydifferentculture.

Whenitcomestothecontentsofthevideo,Istronglyrecommendyoutoincludeourafter-schoolclubs.Amongthem,IthinkthatyoushouldhighlighttheChinesePoetryClubtoconveytheeleganceandspiritsofourancestors’poems.NotonlycanithelpBritishstudentsknowmoreaboutourwell-organizedclubs,butitcanalsobridgethegapbetweenthecultures,thusenhancingtheBritishstudents’understandingofourcountry.

Additionally,shootingthevideointhecanteenisboundtoaddabrillianttouchtothewholevideo.FromthevariousanddeliciousChinesedishes,Britishstudentscanhaveabetterunderstandingofthedifferentculture.Ourdailyfood,whichgivesthemappetite,willsurelyarousetheirinterestandconveythetopicofChinesecultureinamorecomprehensiveway.

Hopemyadvicecanbeofsomehelpandwishyouasuccessfulandmeaningfulexchangevisit!

Yours,sincerely

ChengFang

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DearWangMin,

I’veheardfromyouthatyou’repreparingtoshootavideotointroduceourschooltothesiblingschoolinBritainandareaskingforadviceonthemainthemeandthecontentsconcerned.I’meagertooffermysuggestion.

Ithinkthethemeshouldfocusontheatmosphereandactivitiesinourschool,andnaturallythecontentsshouldcontainthecharacteristicsoftheacademicatmosphereinyourschoolandthefeaturesoftheattractiveactivities.

Inthefirstplace,Ithinkitofgreatimportancetoshowhowlearningisconductedinou