;主题分析

本单元写作情境为“情感,谈论事物如何影响了你”,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中的“生活与学习、做人与做事”这一主题群,涉及子主题“情绪与情感,情绪与行为的调节与管理”。常见的写作任务是面对不好的事情时,如何控制和调整情绪,积极乐观地面对生活。;一、素材积累

【单元主题词汇】;【单元主题佳句】

开头句

1.Somethingthatmademehappywaswinningthepianocompetition.

2.Oneofthesaddestthingsformewaslosingthesingingcompetition.;中间句

1.IwasworriedIwouldmakemistakesduringmyperformance.

2.IfeelverylonelybecauseIhavenofriendstotalkwith.;结尾句

1.Theexperiencetaughtmethatitisveryimportanttohaveconfidenceinourselves.

2.Ibelieveyoucangetonwellwithyourparentsifyouputyourheartintoit.;二、以读促写

假如你是任慧,你校的校报SpeakOut栏目正面向全校征集关于主题为“Somethingthatmademehappyorsad”的稿件,请你根据以下要点提示写一篇不少于70词的短文投稿。;要点提示:1.What’sthething?

2.When,whereandhowdidithappen?

3.Howdiditmakeyoufeel?

4.Whatdidyoulearnfromit?;第一步:审题

时态:________________人称:________________;第二步:列框架;第三步:教材句型微训练

1.教材原句:Butthatmusicmakesmesleepy.

结构解读:makesb.adj.表示“让某人……”

仿写:那些墙上的照片使我不舒服。

____________________________________________;2.教材原句:Well,themoreIgettoknowJulie,themoreIrealizethatwehavealotincommon.

结构解读:themore...themore...表示“越……就越……”

仿写:她越想这件事越感到失望。

________________________________________________________________________________________________;第四步:连句成篇

优秀作文

Somethingthatmademehappy

Thepianocompetitionmademehappy.①IttookplaceonSeptember20thinCityMusicHall.②

Onthatday,Isawmanypeoplethere.Iwassonervous.IwasworriedIwouldmakemistakesduringmyperformance.;ThenIrememberedwhatmyfathertoldme—alwaysbelieveinyourselfandyouarethebest.Hiswordsmadememuchbetter.Whenitwasmyturn,Iwalkeduptothepianowithconfidenceandperformedwell.AndIwantedtoknowtheresult.③WhenIlearnedIwonthefirstprize,Ihuggedmyparentshappily④.

Theexperiencetaughtmethatitisveryimportanttohaveconfidenceinourselves.;满分作文

Somethingthatmademehappy

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