;一、主题分析

本单元写作情境为“感受”,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中的“做人与做事”这一主题群,涉及子主题“自我认识,自我管理,自我提升”。常见的写作任务有自己的经历及感受以及他人的经历对自己的影响。;二、素材积累

主题词汇:

wouldrather//drivesb.crazy/mad//pale//disappoint//pulltogether//behardonsb.//ratherthan//neither...nor//uncomfortable//let...down;重点句式:

1.Tostartwith,itwascloudyandgrey,andcloudydays________________________（使我不舒服）.

2.Themoviewas_________________________________（如此悲伤以至于使Tina和Amy哭了起来）.

3.It________________________（让他感到幸运）toknowthathewasonawinningteam.;4.________________________（不管结果如何）,don’tbetoohardonyourself.

5.Thenextday,Peterwenttosoccerpracticewithcourage_____________________（而不是害怕）inhisheart.

6.Ithink___________________________（如果我们继续团结一致）,we’regoingtowinthenextmatch.;三、写作示例

经历就是体验，经历就是沉淀……你曾赢得过比赛吗？你曾在公众面前表现出色吗？你曾在考试中失败吗？你曾和最好的朋友吵架吗？这些都会是难忘的经历。请以“Anexperiencethatmademe”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次让你感觉开心或难过的经历。;要求：

1.请先将题目补全；

2.字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；

3.词数：80~100。

Anexperiencethatmademe__________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________;谋篇布局

1.审题立意

①主题：Anexperiencethatmademe

②人称：第一人称

③时态：一般过去时;2.写作提纲;基础篇

Anexperiencethatmademehappy

IwontheNationalEnglishSpeechContest.Iwillneverforgetthatday.①

Atthattime,IshowedgreatinterestinoralEnglish.ToimprovemyspokenEnglishandpublicspeakingability,IactivelyparticipatedintheNationalEnglishSpeechContest.;Ipreparedforthecontest,②andpracticedthespeecheverynightafterIfinishedmyhomework.Iwouldn’tstoptohavearestuntilImadeprogress.ImadeeveryeffortforitandIwonfirstprizeinthecontesteventually.Thisexperiencehelpedmealot.

MydiligenceandperseveranceplayanessentialroleinachievingsuccessinEnglishlearning.④;提升篇

Anexperiencethatmademehappy

NeverwillIforgetthedaywhenIwontheNati