;一、主题分析
本单元的写作情境为“各国不同的风俗习惯”,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“历史、社会与文化”这一主题群,涉及子主题“世界主要国家的文化习俗”,常见的写作任务是不同国家的风俗习惯、打招呼的方式、餐桌礼仪及去别人家拜访的规则等。;二、素材积累
主题词汇:
tablemanners//forthefirsttime//kisssb.//makefriendswithsb.//behaveproperly//makesb.feelathome//getusedtosth./doingsth.;重点句式:
1.Iheldoutmyhandand______________________(令我吃惊的是),shekissedmeonbothsidesofmyface!
2.InChina,_________________________________________
________________(用你的筷子敲空碗是不礼貌的).
3.InmanyeasternEuropeancountries,you’resupposedto__________________________________(握手前脱掉手套).;4.Wenevervisitafriend’shouse_____________________(事先没有通电话).
5.守时是重要的。
__________________________________________
6.注意你的礼仪!
__________________________________________;三、写作示例
假如你是李华,你校交流生Tom将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关礼仪。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1.提前5—6分钟到;
2.带合适的礼物;
3.餐桌礼仪:
①用餐时,需等长辈先动筷子;;②吃饭时避免发出声响;
③……
要求:
1.可适当增加细节;
2.词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。;DearTom,
Howareyoudoing?Learning______________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
LiHua;谋篇布局
1.审题立意
①主题:在中国做客时的礼仪
②人称:第二人称
③时态:一般现在时;2.写作提纲;基础篇
DearTom,
Howareyoudoing?LearningthatyouareabouttopayavisittoaChinesefriendandwanttoknowtheChinesecustoms,Iamwritingtogive①yousomeadvice.
Firstly,arrive5to6minutesearlier.ItiscommonintraditionalChineseculture.②Secondly,bringsomeappropriategiftsforthehost.;ThingslikesmallgiftsfromyourhomecountrycanbeOK.Besides,understandtablemanners.YouhavedinnerwithaChinesefamily.Youneedtowaitfortheelderlytostartthedinnerfirst.③Trynottomakeanynoisewheneating.
Perhapsyouhavesomeotherquestions.Thencontactme.④
Yours,
LiHua;提升篇
DearTom,
Howareyoudoing?LearningthatyouareabouttopayavisittoaChinesefriendandwonderingabouttheChinesecustoms,Iamwritingtoputforwar